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Prologue
{Ext: space, Olam-Chuphshah - Night}
Satan and his executives, which are; Abyzou, Eisheth, Azazel, Malphas, Agrat and Beleth stand in space around planet Jupiter in distances. A blue light surrounds them and they form a ring around Jupiter.
Satan
(to the planet)
I preserved you, hoping that Michael and his angels will come. But they failed me…
(grunts)
I curse you with severe pain forever, in agony shall you endure and in turmoil shall you exist because you have once harboured the enemy of the world you live in.
Executives & Satan
(in unison)
Curse be unto you! Curse be unto you! Curse be unto you!
The blue ring-of-light, which surrounds them moves into planet Jupiter, changes Jupiter’s atmosphere into turbulent clouds, and causes thunders.
Satan
Hahahaha!
(his Executives join him to laugh)
End of Prologue
Synopsis
After the chaos of "After the Fall"—when one-third of heaven stood cast out, when Satan’s wars failed, and the Strike against Ahavah sealed the fallen as demons—something unexpected emerged: regret. Tormented by the absence of Ahavah’s light, many demons turned back… seeking redemption. But the law stood firm. Condemned beings could not return to Shamayim.
So the 24 Elders devised an unprecedented path—one that demanded total surrender. Memory would be stripped. Identity erased. Existence reduced to soul. And rebirth would begin… in a fragile new world. A world now watched by Satan. Because if he could corrupt it—then redemption itself would collapse. The First World had begun. And so had the greatest test of all.
Framework & Style
The content of this book begins with a Prologue. The book shares similar elements with screenplay and stage-play scripts, making it adaptable to either format. Character introductions are not often used, especially among the angels or demons, because their names appear on their chests.
This book is written in a straightforward way to ensure clarity for readers. The partial screenplay style is used to create a vivid picture of events in the reader’s mind. Present tense and present continuous tense are applied to align with the format. Additionally, the use of Old English from the King James Version of the Bible is present in this book.
Examples of elements you will encounter in the book include:
- Parentheses “( )”
Used to enclose a short action or event that occurs while a character is speaking.
- Braces “{ }”
Used to enclose an indented UPPERCASE time and location of a particular scene or event. Example:
{EXT. GARDEN OF EDEN - DAY} or
{INT. JOHN'S BEDROOM – DAY}
- UNDERLINED UPPERCASE WORDS
Used for music headings & endings, scene endings, and topic headings (such as flashbacks). They are also used in the Appendix, Characters, and Key to Pronunciation pages.
- Slash “ / ” between Location and Time
Used to avoid transitions like “[INTERCUT]” to allow a smoother reading flow. A slash can occur between two different locations and times to avoid repeating them, so the reader can follow with ease.
- EXT. (Exterior)
Indicates that an event or scene is taking place outside a building. This is sometimes not repeated in the second venue if the preceding scene also happened outside.
- INT. (Interior)
Indicates that an event or scene takes place inside a building. Similarly, this is sometimes not repeated if the preceding scene also occurred indoors.
- Day
The "Day" in this book refers to the light
that comes from Ahavah. In this series, the light from stars will also contribute to "Day." It indicates scenes that happen in daylight.
- Night
Used to indicate scenes occurring at night, similar to "Day."
Preface
This book contains images, so it is recommended that you zoom in to view them properly. ‘The First World’ is the fourth series of The 24 Elders series, continuing after the events of After the Fall, revealing the path of redemption set before those who once stood condemned.
This series is divided into several sections: The Penance, The Oath, Second Chance, The Fall of Man, Age of Evil, and Spare No One.
The Penance reveals a turning point among the fallen, as many demons, tormented by the absence of Ahavah’s presence, abandon Satan’s order and seek reconciliation with the 24 Elders. Yet, their return to Shamayim is not permitted, for the law remains unbroken.
In The Oath, the Elders unveil a path never before taken—a chance at restoration that demands full consent, sacrifice, and the acceptance of irreversible risk.
Second Chance introduces the dawn of a new existence, where life begins anew within Olam-Chuphshah. Here, the Elders entrust creation with a divine essence known as The Seed of Life, setting the stage for a fragile beginning.
However, in The Fall of Man, the balance is threatened as Satan rises once more, seeking dominion through subtle influence and the power he still wields.
Finally, Age of Evil and Spare No One unveil devastating events and decision—one that challenges the fate of all life and questions whether redemption itself can endure.
For more information, refer to the “ Appendix” or The 24 Elders Universe Blog at [ https://the24eldersuniverse.blogspot.com], where topics of interest are explained in detail. Brief information is indicated between double slashes (// info... //) under certain sentences to further elaborate on what you have read. This story also includes characters listed on the “ Characters’ page.”
The book contains some Hebrew vernacular. For pronunciation guidance, refer to the “ Key to Pronunciation.”
- The Penance
- {INT. SATAN’S PALACE, PLANET OUKHAH - NIGHT}
The Executive Council members are sitting on their thrones on the pulpit at the centre of the palace.
While The Universal Council members are all seated on tiered seats in the palace.
Satan's staff is providing light for the house while the wall of the palace is slightly glowing.
- SATAN
- (eyes are glowing while standing)
- You still have the gut to ask me to revive your worlds after betraying me in that battle?
- ABYZOU
- (kneels)
- My lord, I…
- SATAN
- (interrupts)
- Shut up!
- (eyes become normal and he faces the council)
- I’m afraid, your planets will not be revived and you must all remain loyal to me as long as you are living in this universe. I was born in this universe.
- KOKABIEL
- (stands)
- You won’t revive our planets.
- (nods)
- Hmm… that’s pretty nice. I’m sorry for what I’m going to say though. First of all, we went to the battlefield with you but it appears as if you didn’t see those creatures that attacked us. Mare looking into their eyes you become overwhelmed with a terrible fear. I think that’s why we couldn’t stay there for a moment, even, your demons were the ones who encouraged us with their skilful race towards Shahar. Seeing their back, we took off after them as well.
The council members giggle.
- SATAN
- (grunts)
- Hmmm…
- KOKABIEL
- Secondly, you promised to release Paimon and Eligos when the war is over.
- (looks around)
- I don’t think they’re here. So, let’s assume it was a mistake, or the words just pop out of your mouth. If you don’t mind, you can withdraw that statement with a soothing apology, we’ll be glad to accept and move on. So, yeah…
(steps forward slightly)
- We’re listening.
- SATAN
- (faces Kokabiel)
- This war is not over! So, what do you mean? Are you threatening me?
- KOKABIEL
- You must keep to your promise if you want our loyalty.
- AZAZEL
- (to Kokabiel)
- Speak for yourself!
- KOKABIEL
- (to the Council)
- Paimon was right! He will never revive our worlds. You all can keep following him, I’m done here.
- SATAN
- Where are you going to go?
- KOKABIEL
- I’ll be right here in this universe.
Satan throws a lightning bolt against Kokabiel.
A shield appears around Kokabiel and swallows the lightning bolt.
Everyone becomes dazed.
- SATAN
- (stunned)
- What?
- KOKABIEL
- Don’t tell me you don’t know that we just came here.
- AZAZEL
- And, what does that supposed to mean?
- KOKABIEL
- The power of the Most High is still fresh in us.
- (looks at the newly fallen kings and leaders)
- It’s fresh in all of us.
- (faces Satan)
- But old in you and your demons!
- (disappears)
- BELETH
- Did he just leave this council?
- AGIEL
- (stands)
- Kokabiel is right!
- (faces Satan)
- You must respect us. Secondly, you have to release Paimon and Eligos. We cannot turn against one another if we hope to win this war.
- (to the Council)
- If he will not revive our worlds or free Paimon and Eligos, then my loyalty to this council will end as well.
- SATAN
- (sits)
- Hmm…
- MALPHAS
- (stands)
- Then prepare for war!
Malphas’ statement causes a great pandemonium in the palace.
- SATAN
- (stands)
- Quiet!
- (silence befalls the house)
- Paimon, Eligos, that’s my business. I will do to them as I desire. They’re my property. And, as long as you live in this universe, you belong to me. Anyway, I will not fight against you, my children. It’s pointless to destroy what already is mine.
- AGIEL
- We are not your children or property! I guess you’re afraid of us now.
- (to the council)
- We can overpower him if we come together against him.
The crown on Satan’s head glows and he points a blasting energy against Agiel.
The force blasts Agiel and all the demons that were closer to Agiel.
SATAN
(rages)
I am your father as long as you live beneath the walls of this universe!
- (eyes glow)
- You must do as I say!
- {HALL, MELTSAR - DAY}
Shafat is moving back and forth. Rosh-Seraph is standing behind Yakach.
- SHAFAT
- He went very far this time.
- YAKACH
- Who knows what he’s able to do next?
- GADOL
- He has been bringing the war to us, it’s time we take it to him and give him no rest or time to think of any next move against us.
- GEBURAH
- Gadol, you’re right. We have to distract him.
- YAKACH
- Wait Geburah, for how long are we going to do this?
- GADOL
- For as long as forever.
{EXT. METALLIC GROUND, PLANET MERCURY - NIGHT}
Kokabiel is standing with Astaroth, Ipos and Bifrous.
- KOKABIEL
- (squats and knocks the ground)
- Cursed.
- ASTAROTH
- Why did you do that?
- KOKABIEL
- Well, just trying to examine our curse.
- ASTAROTH
- No, I mean in the council.
- KOKABIEL
- I want him to know that he’s not the only powerful being here. Secondly, he lost some powers when he faced Michael in the last war. Before I did that, I knew he was going to react, so I had to protect myself. But then I wanted the council to know the kind of being we’re dealing with.
- IPOS
- You’ve opened their eyes. When you left, Agiel stood on your terms against him.
- KOKABIEL
- Damn, he shouldn’t. He could imprison him.
- BIFROUS
- He blasted him.
- KOKABIEL
- Good for him then, he’ll heal.
- (stands)
- See, I don’t know, but this is not a good place to stay.
- BIFROUS
- What?
- KOKABIEL
- I mean it was but, not anymore.
- {UNDERGROUND, OUKHAH}
Paimon and Eligos are panting on the ground with their heads bowed to Satan; standing before them.
Paimon and Eligos are naked with sore bodies. Their bodies begin to heal gradually. Garment appears on their bodies and they stand before Satan.
- SATAN
- Lessons learnt?
- ELIGOS
- We will never break any rule from you ever again.
- PAIMON
- Yes, we won’t.
- SATAN
- Yeah, I believe you. Am I not merciful?
- (Paimon and Eligos remain silent)
- Of course, I am, even though you will not admit it. I know I am.
- {INT. HALL, MELTSAR - DAY}
- SHAFAT
- You know, father wants us to live in peace, and not in trouble. Besides, we’re not the type that looks for trouble, we’re the Elders of the living.
- GADOL
- So, what are you saying?
- SHAFAT
- I’m saying that we’re above any attempt to take the fight to him. Satan is a kid wandering in ignorance. I guess this will be fixed when The Son of The Most High comes.
- {EXT. ROCKY GROUND, ROGHELAZ - NIGHT}
- Two Centaurs and one Minotaur are under the Shade of light.
- MINOTAUR
- It is better to live under the laws of the Most High than to live in total darkness under Satan.
- 1ST CENTAUR
- There is more freedom in Shamayim than it is here, even under the law.
- 2ND CENTAUR
- We’re already doomed. I don’t think we can face the Elders, they may cast us to Yam-Esh at once.
- MINOTAUR
- They’re merciful. Satan is just trying to use us to get what he wants.
- 1ST CENTAUR
- I can’t believe that I accepted to strike the Most High.
- MINOTAUR
- Me too.
- 2ND CENTAUR
- I’m going back.
- MINOTAUR
- Me too.
They look behind and see thousands of demons coming in their direction, all under the Shade of light and they all laugh.
- 1ST CENTAUR
- Seriously...
Minotaur
We’re not the only ones afterall.
{INT. HALL, MELTSAR - DAY}
CHEN
What if he figured out a way to avert or delay The Most High’s Son?
SHAFAT
He can’t.
GEBURAH
You don’t know what he’s capable of, Shafat.
SHAFAT
I know.
GEBURAH
How come you didn’t warn us earlier before all these things happened?
SHAFAT
Hmm…
(nods)
GEBURAH
His recent skilful moves have proven his unaware abilities like the Michaels. I don’t think we want to allow him to get to the apex
of his aspirations.
(relaxes)
We all know what he wants. Therefore, we must stop him for as long as he’s out there walking freely, he can do unimaginable things.
{EXT. TRAINING GROUND, MICHAEL'S TERRITORY}
Michael stands in front of his angels and spins his fist very fast like a wheel.
MICHAEL
(to his angels)
Come on, do this.
Gabriel, Selaphiel, Raguel and Raphael are sitting in front of the angels in training.
Michael leaves the angels at training and walks to where Gabriel, Selaphiel, Raguel and Raphael are sitting.
GABRIEL
(to Michael)
You’re done?
MICHAEL
Yeah, for now.
RAGUEL
Gabriel, don’t you think Michael should train all of us just in case something strange attempt to happen again?
GABRIEL
Nothing strange will happen. Just the usual things.
SELAPHIEL
I think Raguel is right.
GABRIEL
Hey, come on, I’m the one who lost so many angels here. Not any of you guys.
MICHAEL
Hey, guys, Gabriel isn’t interested in your proposal.
GABRIEL
What? Do you like that idea?
MICHAEL
Of course, why not…
RAPHAEL
I like it too…
MICHAEL
I mean, this is what I do, why I was created. So, why shouldn’t I use it to glorify my creator by teaching others?
GABRIEL
It’s up to you then. But remember, you denied Satan that knowledge.
RAPHAEL
What are you saying, Gabriel?
SELAPHIEL
Gabriel, we’re covered with love. Trust me, the Elders would love this! They gave us the ‘go ahead’ already.
MICHAEL
Well, my instinct never led me to show Satan anything.
RAPHAEL
That’s a good point.
Their legs begin to blink green.
SELAPHIEL
Michael, is this you?
MICHAEL
(to Selaphiel)
I thought it’s you.
GABRIEL
Pardon!
SELAPHIEL
Pardon what…
GABRIEL
The gate…
RAGUEL
What?
Selaphiel
Pardon the gate?
{SHAHAR}
All the Elders are standing outside the gate.
Thousands of demons are kneeling before the Elders.
Rosh-Seraph is with the Elders but none can see him except the Elders.
QARA
All low demons, none of their leaders is with them.
ROSH-SERAPH
As I said, they’re on their own, this is more like a self-decision.
SHAFAT
They all really decided to go and now coming back the same way.
YAKACH
Strange.
GEBURAH
And confused.
DEMONS
(in unison)
Guardians of the creations of the Most High, please accept my humble plea. I was a fool for believing in Satan. Please pardon me and accept me back into the fold of the angels. This time, whatever thou wills; that will I do without regret. Forgive me for I know not of what I did, I am a sinner and I am here to
plead for a second chance. I will never ever leave again, my duty will be to you as the Most High wills.
All the Archangels appear behind the Elders.
Michael lifts his right hand and two Holocheists appear near the walls of the gate.
ROSH-SERAPH
All speaking for themselves.
YAKACH
(through the mind to all the Elders)
What if this is one of his tricks?
SHAFAT
Gabriel!
GABRIEL
Yes, my lord?
SHAFAT
Confront Satan; let us see their reactions.
GABRIEL
When?
SHAFAT
Right now. We’ll wait.
GABRIEL
(through the mind to Michael)
It’s up to you, warrior.
Michael travels in the speed of light out of Shahar.
Raguel
(sighs)
Like he was waiting for it…
Selaphiel
Damn it, Raguel. Will you focus?
Raguel
Whatever… I thought Gabriel would send me.
The Archs laugh briefly.
{EXT. ICY METAL GROUND, PLANET RAZUA - NIGHT}
Abyzou is lying down, gazing up into the dark sky. A wooden torch pinned on the ground is providing light for her.
Suddenly, Michael appears behind Abyzou.
ABYZOU
What are you doing here, Elders’ pet?
MICHAEL
(beats Abyzou flawlessly with one hand)
Where is Satan?
ABYZOU
Go to hell!
Michael lifts Abyzou, burns her head with fire, and buries her head in the ground with one punch.
MICHAEL
I know you’ve thrown away your respect,
you better go get it back.
Suddenly, a blasting energy hits Michael.
Two feathers come out of the back of Michael and pins into the ground; supporting Michael from falling.
Satan appears in front of Michael and faces the direction of Abyzou as her head is buried in the ground.
SATAN
(to Abyzou)
Get out of here!
Abyzou disappears by sinking into the ground where her head is buried.
MICHAEL
(giggles)
She can’t even look at me. You’ve really taught them well.
SATAN
What do you want, Michael?
MICHAEL
(stands upright. His feathers disappear)
Wow! You’re unimaginably getting stronger every second. Believe me, I wasn’t aware of that. Seem like you’ve figured out a way to take me unaware…
(nods)
But don’t forget. I taught you that.
Suddenly, another blasting energy comes out of the ground and carries Michael into the sky.
SATAN
You will bow to me someday!
Suddenly, a blasting energy pushes Satan into the ground and make a hole.
MICHAEL
(appears at the edge of the hole where Satan is)
How did you master that trick down here? Well, seems like you’re not the only one with the unforeseen trick. Happy now? Bye.
(disappears)
SATAN
(bursts out of the ground and roars with a thundering sound)
Arrrrrrh! I will humble you one day, Michael!!
{SHAHAR - DAY}
SHAFAT
Clearly, he’s not behind this.
YAKACH
He’s clearly offline.
Michael appears within the Archangels where he was.
ROSH-SERAPH
They will have to pay a great price to gain back their glory.
SHAFAT
(to the demons)
What you’re asking for won’t be very easy for you to bear. You understand there could be consequences.
DEMONS
(in unison)
I will suffer for what I have done to the Most High. Let, my Lord, do to me as he pleases.
SHAFAT
Give us some time to come to your aid!
Shafat waves his hand in the direction of the demons and all the demons become statically immobilized.
MICHAEL
(whispers to Raguel)
He’s not even aware that they’re here.
SHAFAT
It’s better they stay this way until we figure out how to deal with them.
GABRIEL
(through the mind to Michael)
This is a very hard decision for the Elders.
Shade of light covers the Elders, they form a circle and their seats appear behind them.
SHAFAT
Let’s sit down.
All the Elders sit.
YAKACH
They’re cursed. Just look at them, they don’t look like angels anymore.
EMUNAH
We need to lift this curse before Shamayim or any other universe can accept them.
ROSH-SERAPH
Eternal curses are not easily lifted, Emunah.
EMUNAH
Second chance?
GADOL
They made their choice by leaving us. No problems… but striking the Most High sealed their fate forever.
Rosh-Seraph
Eternal condemnation awaits them no matter what happens.
EMUNAH
They’re in search for redemption.
YAKACH
They think it’s that simple.
CHESED
I can feel their pain and great remorse.
A sad countenance comes over the Elders.
Suddenly, lightning bolts accompanied with thunders occur in Shahar.
ROSH-SERAPH
New prophecy.
Shade of light goes off around the Elders.
SHAFAT
(to the Archangels)
Wait here. We’ll be back soon.
All the Elders disappear.
The Archangels walk closer to the demons.
GABRIEL
I can’t even recognize any of them.
RAGUEL
Me too.
MICHAEL
It’s the curse. They’re no more angels, they’re demons.
SELAPHIEL
We know, Michael!
MICHAEL
Whatever… but somehow, I think it didn’t affect most of the leaders. Abyzou and Satan are still in their nature.
GABRIEL
It’s a process, it will get to them. It may take a while of time.
{INT. HALL, MELTSAR}
All the Elders are standing before the Wall of scroll.
A write-up is on the Wall of scroll.
AHAVAH’S VOICE
(reads the write-up in the minds of the Elders)
Give them a second chance. Make them a world of their own. The promise I made to Boqer must be fulfilled, I will raise another Lucifer from the offspring of Boqer. My son is coming to completely lift the curse from them, and win them back to me. My son is coming soon, prepare the way for him.
The Wall of scroll disappears with the sound of thunders.
The Elders’ seats appear under the Elders and they sit on them.
CHEN
What shall we do now that they are under a curse?
Tub
Quite unfortunate…
A round screen showing all the universes appears in their midst.
All the universes (as shown on the screen) are covered with red lights except five universes because Shahar, Olam-Chuphshah, Olam-Zaku and Yam-Esh are covered with
green lights. While Gan-Eden is covered with a yellow light.
Chen
See? Only Shahar, Olam-Chuphshah, Olam-Zaku and Yam-Esh can accept them.
SHAFAT
Yeah. It’s very obvious, though they’re cursed, Shahar is able to accept them because it’s a gateway.
(points at Olam-Zaku on the screen)
Olam-Zaku is able to accept them because it’s another gateway.
(points at Yam-Esh)
Yam-Esh is able to accept them because that’s where they’re meant to be due to the level of their sin, they’re to be destroyed in Yam-Esh. Olam-Chuphshah will always accept them, besides, that’s where they’re coming from. Gan-Eden will only accept them only if they follow through Olam-Zaku and any other universe as a gateway, and of course, you know what that means.
ROSH-SERAPH
And that’s the only way. But even as that, once they approach Shamayim, they’ll be sent to Yam-Esh, and be destroyed.
Shafat
Well, that’s so because the Prophecy just said it, only the Most High’s Son can lift the curse.
(nods)
Then, they can be like the angels that they once were, and exist in their full glory. But until then, we have a lot of work to do.
{EXT. ROCKY GROUND, ROGHELAZ - NIGHT}
Alastor and Andromalius are walking very fast towards a mountain.
Suddenly, Zepar and Bathym appear behind Alastor and Andromalius.
ZEPAR
Alastor!
Alastor and Andromalius stop walking. Zepar and Bathym run to them. Shade of light covers all of them.
BATHYM
I don’t know how to explain this to the council. Half of my demons are gone.
ZEPAR
Mine too.
ALASTOR
That’s what Andromalius just told me now.
ANDROMALIUS
Out of my control.
ZEPAR
The problem is; they went back to Shamayim.
BATHYM
Do you think they’ll accept them?
ANDROMALIUS
It’s quite a while they left.
ZEPAR
I don’t think they’re ever going to come back. Do you?
ALASTOR
(exhales heavily)
I thought I was the only one affected. Thank goodness, I won’t have to face this alone.
BATHYM
So, what do we do?
ALASTOR
We have to let others know so we can prevent it if possible.
{INT. HALL, MELTSAR - DAY}
GEBURAH
Placing them with Satan would be a big risk. I mean you heard the prophecy, how can we let the Most High’s Son live in Olam-Chuphshah with Satan?
SHAFAT
Tell me, do you have a better alternative?
ROSH-SERAPH
There is no other way, Geburah. As long as they still have the memory of what they did
and in the cursed state, Shamayim will never ever accept them.
SHAFAT
They may never forgive themselves with the memory of what they’ve done to our loving Father as well.
CHEN
(nods)
I wish there was a better way.
SHAFAT
At least, things will return the way they were when father’s Son comes.
TSALACH
(sighs)
This was all our fault.
ROSH-SERAPH
Father also thinks this is all his fault as well.
SHAFAT
We have to bear it.
{INT. SATAN’S PALACE, PLANET OUKHAH - NIGHT}
Satan and his Executive Council members are sitting on their seats.
SATAN
I perceived that some of our members may be hiding something from me.
AZAZEL
Forgive me, my Lord, I lost some low members.
BELETH
What? I’m trying to figure out how it happened to me. I thought I was the only one.
SATAN
Exactly, that’s what I thought. Not only you, it’s happening.
MALPHAS
What’s happening?
SATAN
You now want to solve your problems yourselves. I understand it’s not your fault, it’s the curse. When we struck the Most High, we all became cursed and condemned. Then the Elders added theirs.
ABYZOU
(faces Azazel and Beleth)
What are you doing? Was that supposed to be a secret?
AZAZEL
I’m sorry. It just happened.
BELETH
I couldn’t control it.
SATAN
Why couldn’t I read it from you?
AZAZEL
I don’t know.
Beleth sharply glances at Azazel and nods in agreement with him.
EISHETH
Any idea where they went?
SATAN
Shamayim.
ABYZOU
What?
SATAN
The attack from Michael wasn’t his nature. He came to find out something. Now I know why.
AGRAT
Do you think they’ll accept them?
SATAN
I don’t think so, they’re cursed. Nevertheless, let’s watch and see. They can’t get away just like that, we started this together and we must finish it together.
END OF THE PENANCE
The Oath
{INT. HALL, MELTSAR - DAY}
The Elders are sitting around their table as usual. Rosh-Seraph is standing beside them.
GEBURAH
The new age has begun.
SHAFAT
Let us create humans with freewill and place the repented demons in them as living souls. Let them pay for their deed by death, then, we shall resurrect them and bring them back to their glory when the Most High’s Son comes.
TSALACH
Then, we’ll give humans the form of animals, at least they’re paying for their own evil deeds.
SIMCHAH
Hmm… how will they be able to gain back their glory if we make them look exactly like their own creatures? They will never forgive us when they come back. Father may never forgive us as well, you know, he made them in an angelic form. Let us eliminate their memories since we can’t directly lift the curse ourselves.
TSALACH
Come on, they won’t even realize it and they’ll have conscience, that’s what will make them different from the animals. Besides, they can reason. So, when they come back, they’ll be exactly as they were; like angels.
ANAH
All right, then they shall have a new body, new memory and new age.
KOACH
Let’s talk more about their nature. I don’t think we’d want to create them all at the same time. I think we should come up with the idea of rebirth.
SHAFAT
Hmm… rebirth. That’s really a complete world of their own as said the prophecy.
YAKACH
That’s exactly what father means.
TIPHARAH
They will be very difficult to control if anything goes wrong in the process.
EMUNAH
You’re right. Satan may make them his target since we’re making them under his nose. Since we’re made of fiery light, we will make them in such a way that their nature will oppose ours.
TIQVAH
Why?
EMUNAH
So that it will be very difficult for Satan and his demons to control or be like them just in case something goes wrong.
TIQVAH
It will also be the same for us, we can’t control them that much too.
EMUNAH
A world of their own. That’s it, Tiqvah. We don’t need to control them if they go away. Let’s believe they can survive by themselves. Our main aim should be to sustain them until the arrival of the Most High’s Son.
AMAN
We’ll protect the entire zone where we will place humans. For the rebirth, they will have to be in pairs and remember, they won’t have to be alone. We’ll make animals for them, they’ll have a kingdom exactly like what we have here in the Territories of Shamayim.
SHAFAT
That’s a good point.
OSHER
We’ll make them male and female, just like the angels. But they will possess reproductive organs unlike the angels. The male becomes a Man and the female a
Woman. They shall mate to reproduce. The Woman shall carry a womb where souls shall form as babies. This means of mating to reproduce will also apply to all the animals and creatures.
BERAKAH
(nods)
By that, we’ll be able to influence them through their parents and make them obey laws.
TUB
Remove law from them if you want peace, otherwise the Most High’s Son would be forced to bow to that law. Since the Most High did not make us under any law, then we can’t put the Most High’s Son under one. It was the law that made them go away and get themselves into this mess. When they’ll be back here, they can then be under the law.
AMATS
We’ll make them a law that will suit their nature, Tub.
YASHAR
Just as Tub said, the Son of The Most High will come through them. He’ll be under such law and in the form of animals as well. Or am I missing something?
Amats
Well, the law has to be read to humans in
human nature, that is, by a man or by any of us in human form. It must not be read by us to them directly from our nature, else, it would bind their souls, and even that of the Most High’s Son to it forever.
SHAFAT
Okay! We are in the image of the Most High. So, Let us make Man in our own image. Since it is through Man that the Most High’s Son will be reborn.
(silence befalls the Elders for a while)
It’s up to us to prepare the way as said the prophecy.
TAHOR
Giving them a reproductive organ will tamper with the nature of the Most High’s Son.
SHAFAT
Don’t worry about that, Tahor, when the time comes, we’ll know how to go about that. That’s not a problem at all.
(nods)
It shouldn’t be…
HUPOMONE
In that case, we’ll make sure that humans obey the law of rebirth. If Satan finds a way to communicate with them and maybe deceive them, he may discourage them from making babies in order to avert the birth of
the Most High’s Son, or stop repented demons from being born into the human nature.
HADAR
We shall inject love into their mating process. It will be irresistible, so even if Satan finds a way to get to them, he can never stop their reproductive process.
SHAFAT
That’s right. So that when the Most High’s Son shall come, nothing will be able to stand in his way.
TIQVAH
Then as Tsalach said, we’ll give humans the form of an animal. That is, we’ll make them from dust but still in our image. The Most High’s Son can transform himself at any time to his glorious state. He should just be born, that’s just our goal.
QARA
Since the Most High’s Son will come through them, then we shouldn’t create Man to die. As a respect to the Most High and to the Son, let us make Man Immortal but if he follows Satan, he becomes mortal. By removing the death penalty sake of the Son, Man shall live for One day, which shall be a thousand years in his own world’s time. And once they completely live for a thousand years, they
will be transformed and kept at Gan-Eden universe awaiting the Most High’s Son who could help them transform into their glorious angelic state directly; without dying.
ROSH-SERAPH
(eyes glow and he speaks quickly)
The sin of the strike is unforgivable, now realms outside the ones you know will accept the repentant demons. There is no way for them to escape the punishment of the sin of the Strike. They are meant for eternal condemnation.
Shafat
What shall we do then? Remember, we are bound to help, as it is the means of preparing the way for the Most High’s Son.
Rosh-Seraph
If they shall become souls and be put into bodies in another form, then they should be trapped within that body for eternity, else, as soon as they leave that body, they would still be guilty of the sin of the strike including being condemned, for no one has the power to deliver them from this condemnation safe the Son of the Most High.
(his glowing eyes become normal)
SHAFAT
(smiles)
Don’t worry, Rosh, we know all this, we’re
just trying to make a way for the Most High’s Son in all probabilities and possibilities.
(faces the Elders)
Well, you’ve heard the revelation from Rosh… that means, we shall create a Seed-of-Life from the powers in our crowns, which shall carry immortality and great authority in it. It would cover their guilt such that if the Most High looks upon them, he would see glorified beings instead of condemned beings, and this would also make them able to be part of Worship hour. So, as long as humans have it, they will be trapped within their bodies and live eternal life forever within the planets of Olam-Chuphshah.
(frowns and warns)
but you must not make any angel or Archangel know this, if they discover that their souls will be trapped within their human body forever, it may discourage other demons to repent. The demons repented because they want to be like angels again. However, If Man loses the Seed, he dies and that means they’ll be guilty of the sin of the Strike as well as suffer its fate of condemnation and destruction forever. And at that point if only the Seed is lost, still, only the Most High’s Son can deliver them and it won’t be our fault anymore because we’ve done our best to save them from the destruction that they’re required to face. So,
this is how it will be: Man will be placed in all the planets in Olam-Chuphshah, then we’ll secure one unique planet for the Most High’s Son. It is in this unique planet that we will place the first man, of whom the Most High’s Son will come through. If they’re able to wield the Seed until the arrival of the Most High’s Son, then Man will be made to transfer that Seed to the Most High’s Son, for whoever is in possession of the Seed owns Olam-Chuphshah universe, also, it will prevent humanity from dying, which means their souls will be forever captured or trapped within their human bodies so as to avoid them facing the eternal wrath of damnation irreversibly meant for them safe for the intervention of the Most High’s Son. So, Elders, let’s continue the discussion about the creation of Man.
SHALOM
Okay… Man shall have dominion over Olam-Chuphshah and its creatures with the Seed of life, and can receive glory from the Most High through the Seed during Worship Hour. If we do this, he’ll honour it and will never let it go since Satan may trick him to lose it.
SHAFAT
Yes! Since the Seed of life will be made from the powers in our crowns, even Satan cannot
withstand its power. It will only serve the one who is authorised to use it. So, we’ll make the Seed of life very powerful that as long as it is in the possession of Man, he will be the king and owner of the universe and Satan can never gain authority over him. So that when the Most High’s Son will come, he’ll take possession of the Seed of life and rule Olam-Chuphshah forever. As for Satan, he’ll crumble in chains when the time comes.
CHEN
That may really piss him off.
SHAFAT
So what?
CHESED
In addition, through the Seed of life shall Man be able to connect with us. We shall make a direct link from the Seed of life to Meltsar and to Qadosh-Nabab. He’ll be able to pray to us and the Most High directly and we’ll be able to respond quickly as well because of the Seed of life.
TUB
With the Seed of life, humans, animals and all creatures will never be hungry or taste for food because of the presence of the Most High that shall get to them through the Seed.
KOACH
You’re right. That will make Man add great
importance to the Seed.
SHAFAT
But in order for this to happen, the first Man and Woman must come from angels who dwell in the presence of the Most High. The thing is, these demons will be born with a wicked heart though the Seed will not let that get activated, if they lose it, then they’ll fall back into wickedness. And with that… unless they live righteously, they can never be saved without the Most High Son’s intervention. So, we must send angels before them, especially in the planet that the ones wielding the Seed will reside.
SIMCHAH
That will give us the advantage to get to them and nurture others through them by sending messengers that will not be bound by Man’s weakness or penalty in case they fall. These messengers shall teach them our ways since Man will not have the memory of his previous world.
QARA
I don’t think Man will lose the Seed, so let’s keep the messenger thing aside.
SHAFAT
No, Qara, we have to expect and prepare for everything. Okay? Don’t forget, it’s Olam-Chuphshah, that’s a free world. A Crown is
there; anything can happen.
Qara
(nods)
True…
YAKACH
It’s a one-way journey for the first Man or for all the humans that will be in all the planets of Olam-Chuphshah. Since it doesn’t matter if they had repented, once they become humans, they are accountable for their deeds whether good or evil and liable to go to Yam-Esh irrespective of their righteous or unrighteousness. So, such a thing, can we be able to bear it in case they fall, bearing in mind that they really felt remorse and out of their heart repented of their evil deed of the unforgivable sin?
GADOL
Don’t forget, that is if something goes wrong which we’re not going to let happen though. With the Seed of life, Man will never have the knowledge of good and evil. That’s what we’ll do to prevent evil; remove the knowledge of good and evil from the Seed.
SHAFAT
Hmm… that’s a very good point. But if they loss the Seed, we’ll find a way to prevent anyone who live righteously from eternal destruction by trapping their souls in Gan-
Eden until the Most High’s Son comes.
Yakach
Perfect…
TIPHARAH
After making Man, considering the freewill status; what if he later betrays us? What shall be done to him, knowing that we gave him a second chance after abusing the Most High and His kingdom in…
SHAFAT
(interrupts)
Right now, they’re meant for Yam-Esh, if they commit more atrocity against the Most High, Yam-Esh is always there to welcome them but with the Seed, they will be coded to hate wicked acts. Okay, so let’s talk about reviving Olam-Chuphshah for the sake of Man and the Most High’s Son. We shall use Earth for Man who will bear the Seed.
AMATS
The former planet of Satan…???
SHAFAT
(interrupts)
When he was Lucifer. Remember, we’re preparing the way for a new Lucifer.
CHESED
That means, when we revive that planet, all the creatures he created including the bad ones will be revived and keep reproducing
for as long as Earth shall live?
SHAFAT
And they’ll all be under humans, besides, we’re reviving all the planets, not just earth, Chesed.
CHESED
Hmm… humans having dominion over our own creatures, how does that sound in your ears?
SHAFAT
That was a gift, let’s leave a gift; a gift. We’ll trap Satan and all the impenitent in Tehom.
CHESED
Okay. That will save us the trouble of human losing the Seed.
SHAFAT
But no matter how we manage to revive Olam-Chuphshah, the light of the Most High can never ever shine on its walls, and besides, Olam-Chuphshah is meant for destruction in the end. It’s a curse, which only the Most High’s Son can remove. But we can revive all the dead stars, planets and moons.
GEBURAH
Then, we’ll need three volunteers from the angels. Risking the lives of all humans in the universe by giving the Seed to repented
demons on earth is not a good idea.
SHAFAT
Yes, one shall become the Man and the other becomes the Woman.
TAHOR
And the third one will be the one to carry the Most High’s Son in her womb when he comes.
SHAFAT
Thank you!
GEBURAH
We will put the Seed in the hands of the angels who will accept the task and place them on earth. We should never put it in the hands of the repented demons no matter what.
HADAR
Since it is through earth that the Most High’s Son will come, we should use uncorrupted beings all through. So, I agree with Geburah.
SHAFAT
Even if we’ll do that, only three persons need to first volunteer as a sacrifice for others.
YAKACH
If by chance humans on earth lose the Seed, it means that all repented demons will have to go through earth. Unless there are
survivors on other planets who can fight through, but they can’t be accountable for their evil deeds afterwards. Only earth people will be accountable for their evil deeds at the end for losing the Seed.
CHEN
If that happens, we can’t control wickedness on earth. Secondly, if the Seed is not with earth beings, there is no way lives (life) in other planets can flourish, they’ll struggle.
SHAFAT
That won’t happen but if it does, then we’ll prepare the way of the Most High’s son in regards to the prophecy and let the defaulters suffer for their wicked acts. Agreed?
THE ELDERS
(In unison)
We agree!
SHAFAT
We should now worry about getting true volunteers.
YAKACH
That’s where the math becomes tough. Who will accept to take these tasks?
ROSH-SERAPH
Should they loss the Seed, no matter what a messenger, that is, an angel sent on earth as a messenger do whether evil or good, they
will always be angels by the time they’re back or done with their mission there and they will never face any punishment because Olam-Chuphshah is a free world.
SHAFAT
No Angel should know this, Rosh, because if they do, their Archangel or other angels who would be their guard on earth may not know how to keep them in line should they commit errors, and in doing so could prompt a weak human to worship them as gods. You can’t risk that, Rosh.
Rosh-Seraph
I don’t communicate with Angels or Archangels, Shafat.
Shafat
Right, but in certain circumstances although it is unlikely, you may. So, that’s why I have to warn you.
Rosh-Seraph
Your nature can never oppose Father. That is why Father gave you, my Elders, free will and placed you under no laws. You can hide the truth in plain sight or lie to anyone at any time and it does nothing to your status of holiness in as much as the Most High’s will is the end.
All the Elders
(in unison)
The Most High’s will is the end.
Shafat
If they loss the Seed, then we must introduce Law to humanity to keep them in line, even though the Angels sent as messengers won’t be liable to suffer any punishment if they break the laws within Olam-Chuphshah, this must be a secret between us only. And as, Rosh, reminded us, we can hide it from them, just to preserve sanity within the angelic realms.
{EXT. MIZBEACH-HALAL - DAY}
All the Angels and Archangels are sitting quietly on the tiered seats of Mizbeach-Halal, listening and looking at the Elders on the platform.
{SHAHAR}
A screen appears in front of all the statically immobilized demons and they are seeing Shafat making an announcement in Mizbeach-Halal through the screen.
{MIZBEACH-HALAL}
SHAFAT
A great purpose has been placed upon three
persons who will choose to accept these tasks. A world of humans portraying Man and Woman; male and female, is about to begin, which will redeem some of your people who are now repented demons.
(exhales)
If you chose to accept, they may become part of this kingdom again. It is a sacrifice and a new beginning: for you will become a soul; you will start afresh on the planets in Olam-Chuphshah. This mission will not commence unless three persons from the holy side accept to go before others.
(nods)
The first male, which is a Man, will be placed on Earth and be given a Seed of life because it is in the appearance of Man that the Most High’s Son will come.
(angels murmur)
As an Earth Man, with the Seed of life, you are the owner of the entire universe; Olam-Chuphshah, until the Most High’s Son come.
(sighs)
All the repented demons will be born in other planets, but selected repented demons and holy beings will possess earth since that is where the Most High’s Son will be born. We don’t want to corrupt earth if something goes wrong along the way.
(smiles shortly)
The Man, together with the Woman shall become one, for the purpose of the Woman is to give birth to souls into Olam-Chuphshah and the Man shall be her head.
(keeps a mean face)
For Earth beings; If you lose the Seed, all the humans or repented demons on other planets may wither away or struggle for life forever;
(glances at Gabriel)
But their souls will be safe, however, other unborn repented demons will be born through you to Earth. Then, wickedness will arise in them, they may corrupt you to break law that we will introduce should that happen, and; they’ll all go to Yam-Esh forever. Once the Seed is lost, you’ll begin to struggle for survival on earth. However, we will make sure that the materials for making food are available, but Man shall cultivate it and take care of the Woman for through her shall all souls and the Most High’s Son come. But with that Seed in your care, you will live forever in peace, without that seed which likely may happen – you will suffer for losing it intentionally because that’s the only means you can lose it, and yet, the Most High’s Son will still come through you and you’ll still suffer in Yam-Esh if His grace do not extend to you by your own doing. I
repeat, If it happens that you lose the Seed, life in all planets will struggle for survival including Earth even though that’s where the Most High’s Son will come through. If you lose the Seed, you will entirely be on your own and rule your world by yourself without our help because that’s what it implies, even other creatures that may accompany you there will be on their own; under freewill and you all may pose danger to one another. Man will take the greatest responsibility of work; you will provide food for the Woman because you were in possession of the Seed. If the Woman helps the Man to lose the Seed, she will labour in pain, which is her greatest purpose and the Man will sweat in the field of work to eat, for without work; no food. All you’ll do is taste for evil and have pride in it.
(smiles)
Hmm… which of course, you know, make the repentant demons pay for their evil deed by death and suffering in Yam-Esh forever, we’ll only try to save a repentant demon who tries to live according to the ways of the Most High, and stay righteously. So, we’ll need three volunteers from the holy side. See, it doesn’t matter if you were a holy being like you are now; once you become a Man and you lose the Seed of life, although not certainly–you will definitely suffer as well. If you live righteously, then we’ll try to help
you. The possibility of losing the Seed is that you won’t be able to recognize your past life, which is this one; to know that you’re always supposed to wield the Seed without losing it.
(to the demons)
Repentant Demons listening to me, if the Seed is lost and you do good works and refuse to let evil overtake your heart, you’ll be pardoned and can enjoy your glory again but only when the Son of the Most High comes. This means that you will feel pains longer, live shortly, fall sick, and become weak, and when you die in evil; your soul may become the property of death and Yam-Esh. That shouldn’t scare you because you will possess the ability to identify good and evil, but all these evil things will happen only if you lose the Seed which I don’t think you may. The Seed-of-Life is the only thing that can shield you from evil, death and punishment for the sin of the Strike. However, this is an exception for messengers that shall carry a message from us to you as time goes on just in case something goes wrong. So, this great sacrifice can amount to a great reward once it’s done. But do not be afraid as we will guide you. For among you, shall the Most High’s Son comes.
(to the angels)
For the three persons that shall volunteer for this task; two shall become Man and Woman on earth. The other shall become a Woman who will carry the Most High’s Son in her womb into that world at the right time. Nevertheless, we are not imposing this on you. It is in your discretion to accept or reject this to happen. So, having listened to me,
(exhales heavily)
who will go?
(silence befalls Mizbeach-Halal for a while)
Remember! It is through your sacrifice shall our Father’s Son comes and also would the repentant demons your former fellows regain back their angelic status.
Suddenly, Fachiel, Kushiel and Evriel fall on their faces and the sky thunders.
FACHIEL, KUSHIEL & EVRIEL
(in unison)
I accept the great cause. Father send me; I will go.
YAKACH
(through the mind to the Elders)
Everything is now simple.
The Elders glance at each other and nod with a smile.
SHAFAT
(through the mind to the Elders)
The very right people.
(loudly)
Come forward!
Fachiel, Kushiel and Evriel appear before the Elders and kneel.
Shafat
We will make sure that the Seed is never stolen from you. Now, here is the good news, we will imprison Satan and his demons for eternity and you all will be free forever under no law.
(the whole crowd applaud the Elders)
Yeah, we will do that.
(faces the crowd)
Let everyone stand!
Gabriel
Wow.
Everyone stands. The Elders surround Fachiel, Kushiel and Evriel.
Michael
A great day.
Gabriel
The Most High’s Son is surely coming, I’m glad.
Shafat draws a triangular line around Fachiel, Kushiel and Evriel.
Rosh-Seraph (unseen by anyone except by the Elders) appears in the midst of the Elders and stands behind Fachiel, Kushiel and Evriel in the triangle.
SHAFAT
(a bottle of oil appears in his right hand)
Blessed be upon you for accepting this task. The Most High shall gain his happiness through your sacrifice and your glory shall never cease as you accept to take this cup.
(walks to Fachiel and pour the oil on his head)
I anoint you this day as a vessel of love through which the Most High’s Son shall come to His glory. Therefore, the Elders name you;
ALL THE ELDERS
(in unison)
Adam, the father of earth-life.
SHAFAT
(walks to Evriel and pour the oil on her head)
I anoint you this day as a vessel of love through which the Most High’s Son shall come to glory. Therefore, the Elders name you;
ALL THE ELDERS
(in unison)
Eve, the mother of earth-life.
SHAFAT
(walks to Kushiel and pour the oil on her head)
I anoint you this day as a vessel of love through which the Most High shall manifest His glory and bring forth His Son who will rule over all life and become king forever. When He comes, He shall be the light for all life forever. You shall remain a virgin until the Son of the Most High come for He is the next Lucifer. Therefore, the Elders name you;
ALL THE ELDERS
(in unison)
Mary, the light bearer.
{INT. SATAN’S PALACE, PLANET OUKHAH - NIGHT}
The universal council of Olam-Chuphshah are in their meeting with Satan and his Executives.
Satan’s staff and the slightly glowing wall is providing light for the council.
SATAN
(to the council)
I know that some of your demons are no longer with us.
(the council murmurs)
Silence!
(silence befalls the council)
They can’t come here with us and start this war, then go back seeking for redemption. We won’t let that happen.
ALASTOR
How can we bring them back when they’re probably under the Elders’ protection right now?
AZAZEL
War.
ALASTOR
With the way they were, they are ready to oppose us with all they’ve got in order not to come back here again.
ABYZOU
We can force them if we threaten to crush them.
PAIMON
Not all of them truly wanted to go back, most of them felt tensed around us, probably because of their sudden appearance and how it didn’t affect the leaders, while others felt deceived, so their minds are made up.
AZAZEL
Does that mean what I’m thinking?
PAIMON
What are you thinking?
AZAZEL
That our intervention can turn the partially
made up minds around?
PAIMON
They won’t come back, but no matter what they do or become, their true nature will accompany them.
ABYZOU
(laughs loudly as others look at her with a surprised look on their faces)
Hahahahaha!
(breaths)
They are going to ruin Shamayim! Hahahaha!
(keeps a mean face)
Why is everybody looking at me?
(winks)
Okay, we’ll hunt them or probably fight them.
PAIMON
We may not be successful in battle against them if Shamayim is behind them now.
SATAN
(glances at Paimon and nods)
I believe that. Let’s look for another way because we must all finish this together. No one will betray us by running back to Shamayim.
AGIEL
Some of my angels whom you pushed to Yam-Esh would have been with us now, if...
SATAN
(interrupts)
Let the past go! Think of the future and see how you can get there using what is present.
HAAGENTI
If we’re not going to use our forces to bring them back, which other possible means can we use?
SATAN
For now none. I want everyone to go and think about that. Dismiss!
{EXT. SHAHAR - DAY}
The Elders are standing before the repented demons. The Archangels are standing behind the Elders.
{MIZBEACH-HALAL}
All the angels are looking at the Elders and Archs at the gate through a big oval screen on the platform.
{SHAHAR}
Shafat walks to the right corner of the gate and pins a pole having a curved point at its centre.
Fachiel, Evriel and Kushiel are standing before the demons.
SHAFAT
This is the doorway to Olam-Zaku; a place for infant souls. You will come forward one
after the other, place your head on the curved side of this rod and read the Oath of Redemption. We can call it the Oath Rod. Through this shall all of you and others that may repent to join you later get redemption. This rod shall stand a witness to you for your actions throughout your life on Earth and other planets of Olam-Chuphshah if the Seed gets missing. Whereas starting from when you take the oath, all your life in Olam-Chuphshah will be recorded as testimony after you. Fachiel, Kushiel and Evriel will go before you. Since they’re holy beings, they’ve taken their oath already by accepting to go, so, they will go together, after then, the rest of you will go one after the other.
(looks at the rod and the rod starts to glow)
This is the beginning.
ELDERS & ARCHS
(in unison)
Let the ritual begin!
Fachiel, Evriel and Kushiel stand around the pole, kneel and place their heads on the curved point at the centre of the pole.
Suddenly, a winding doorway opens and swallows Fachiel, Evriel and Kushiel; they shrink and turn into babies as they go through the winding doorway going to Olam-Zaku.
{OLAM-ZAKU}
Three Womb-like matter becomes red, representing Fachiel, Kushiel and Evriel.
{SHAHAR}
SHAFAT
(looks into the sky)
They’re now souls, waiting for the day of birth into a new life.
(faces the repented demons)
Your turn.
A centaur walks to the pole, kneels and places its head on the curved point of the pole (Oath Rod).
CENTAUR
I am sorry O Most High for putting you into distress. I deserve to be punished for my wrongdoing. Nevertheless, I want to come back to you. As I go through the only way that is, in order to come back into your presence, whatever good outcome or suffering that may await me in my second life, I accept it in good fate.
Suddenly, a winding doorway opens and swallows the centaur.
The centaur shrinks and turns into a baby-like matter as it goes through the winding doorway to Olam-Zaku.
{OLAM-ZAKU}
A Womb-like matter becomes red, representing the centaur (repented-demon).
{SHAHAR}
Another repented-demon walks to the pole.
SHAFAT
(to the Archs and Elders)
Let us go now. We’re done with them.
//And so all the repented demons will eventually take the oath. Once they do, they’ll be stripped of their memories, taken to Olam-Zaku, and become souls, awaiting the day of their birth into a new form/world known as the human realm (a likely fragile world of matter if they loss the Seed-of-Life).//
END OF THE OATH
Second Chance
{EXT. ICY IRON MOUNTAINS, OUKHAH - NIGHT}
Michael is walking slowly; looking into the dark sky. He suddenly throws three spares into the sky at the same time and the spares glow, shine brighter and fade away.
Suddenly, Satan appears in front of Michael.
A glowing ball appears in the hands of Michael and he immediately breaks it on the ground. Then a glowing white field appears and form a dome around Michael and Satan.
Three Holocheists appear outside the dome.
//That is, only Michael and Satan is within the field (dome)//
SATAN
What is the meaning of this?
Satan carefully avoids looking into the eyes of Michael.
MICHAEL
Hmm… I no longer could sense the connection you had with the Archs in you. Well, that’s pretty strange, you caused this to yourself.
SATAN
That didn’t answer my question, brother.
MICHAEL
Seem like we are going to stay here for a while.
SATAN
What are you up to?
MICHAEL
As I said, you’re not the only one with the unforeseen trick.
SATAN
You can be faster than me, but not above me.
MICHAEL
(giggles)
I heard rumours that you’re omnipresence now, let’s see how you can get past these walls to the other side.
SATAN
I know that one day; you will come to my side, Michael.
MICHAEL
Right! But only in your thoughts.
{SPACE, OLAM-CHUPHSHAH}
The Elders are standing in space around planet Earth.
They raise their hands and emit thunderbolts that travel in the speed of light and hit the walls of Olam-Chuphshah.
Olam-Chuphshah starts spinning.
THE ELDERS
(in unison)
Let there be light.
Immediately, all the dead stars start illuminating light (as before).
//The walls of Olam-Chuphshah remain dark even though all the stars inside are back to life because it has been cursed from containing Ahavah’s light.//
Planets start spinning and revolving around stars.
Moons start reflecting light from stars to its closest planets.
Magnetic fields cover all the planets and a light ray links all the planets and stars together.
Figure 1: Olam-Chuphshah’s revival
Figure 2: Olam-Chuphshah in Ab-Olam
//Note: Light from stars become daylight from now on in Olam-Chuphshah//
{EXT. ICY IRON MOUNTAINS, OUKHAH - DAY}
Starlight shines everywhere on the planet.
SATAN
(runs into the field and it bounces him back. The Holocheists hiss at him)
The Elders are here; this is our chance, brother.
Satan avoids eye contact with the Holocheists.
MICHAEL
Okay, that’s why I’m here. Because this is our chance to fight again.
(smiles)
This place no longer belong to you, see it as a memorial centre.
{SANDY FIELD, PLANET POPNENNUS}
Agiel, Paimon and Eligos are walking toward a thousand of demons celebrating for the light.
AGIEL
I knew he would change his mind one day and revive our worlds.
ELIGOS
He can’t.
AGIEL
What?
PAIMON
This is the handwork of holy beings. Could be the Elders, Archs or even Angels.
AGIEL
Why can’t we do any of these?
ELIGOS
Not while we are demons.
AGIEL
The curse really caused great damage to our nature. So, what are we going to tell them?
PAIMON
Satan did this.
AGIEL
(stunned)
What?
ELIGOS
Keep it to yourself unless Satan admits he’s
not behind this.
PAIMON
I sense something weird is about to happen.
ELIGOS
Me too, but I can’t figure it out yet
PAIMON
Me too.
AGIEL
(surprised)
Hmm…
{BEACH, RAZUA}
Eisheth, Abyzou, Malphas, and Agrat are sitting at the edge of the river.
ABYZOU
(looking into the sky)
Hahaha! Master has done it.
MALPHAS
(stands and jumps into the river)
I am grateful for this light, Master!
EISHETH
But, guys, what makes you think Master did this? A while ago, he did not sound like he could.
ABYZOU
See?
(points at the sky)
Starlights; the walls of this universe are still covered with darkness.
MALPHAS
It’s hot.
AGRAT
But where is he now?
ABYZOU
Maybe he doesn’t want to be disturbed.
{ICY IRON MOUNTAINS, OUKHAH}
SATAN
(raises his staff)
Azazel!
MICHAEL
Are you kidding me? No one can hear, track or see you. Shade of light is in the shield. If they do, then my friends out there will take care of them. So, relax, don’t worry, it’s not forever. Just a while and we’re done.
{SPACE, OLAM-CHUPHSHAH - DAY}
Shafat
(to the planets)
Planets of Olam-Chuphshah…
THE ELDERS
(in unison)
We name you the Garden of Eden. In you
shall humans; the repentants, live.
SHAFAT
It is done.
All the Elders disappear.
{TEHOM}
Suddenly, all the demons from Olam-Chuphshah appear and start falling endlessly.
ABYZOU
(whispers)
O shit! Master was right.
MALPHAS
Shut up.
AGRAT
I don’t want to stay here forever.
MALPHAS
Shut up.
{ICY IRON MOUNTAINS, OUKHAH}
SATAN
See, I promise you. This time you’ll be next to the Most High. I’ll give you whatever you need. In fact, we’ll divide Ab-Olam into two and you’ll take the greater part, brother.
MICHAEL
Sorry, I’m not interested. I like the way I am and what I do.
SATAN
Screw you!
MICHAEL
Yeah, I’ve screwed you many times. I mean, I always have!
SATAN
(skin becomes red)
Arrrrrh!
(dazed)
These stars now produce heat?
MICHAEL
Yeah, only on your cursed nature, it won’t hurt the new inhabitants of these planets. So, that means you can never live here again, but don’t worry, I’ll help you.
SATAN
Help me?
MICHAEL
What are friends for?
SATAN
Brothers!
MICHAEL
(smiles)
Former brothers, I haven’t forgotten.
Michael covers Satan with clouds of dust and they both disappear.
{TEHOM}
Satan and Michael appear.
SATAN
(starts falling)
What is this?
MICHAEL
You should thank me, hahaha! Bye!
(disappears)
SATAN
(exhales)
Thank goodness.
{GARDEN OF EDEN, EARTH}
The garden is surrounded by beautiful trees and everywhere is green.
Animals and creeping things are walking and playing around in the garden.
A magnificent white building is in the middle of the garden.
The sounds of birds accompany the movement of the sea waves.
The sun is big and providing light for the garden. The sky is blue and having thicker clouds.
The Sun is slightly closer to the Earth.
Two heaps of sand are at the middle of the garden and suddenly, naked Man and Woman sit at the same time out of
the belly of the sand.
SHAFAT
(body begins to glow that his face is hard to be seen)
Hmm… the first living humans, you are welcome to Earth!
(walks to the Man)
Rise, I name you Adam.
(walks to the Woman)
Rise, I name you Eve.
(a staff appears in his right hand and he gives it to Adam)
Take, this is called the Seed-of-Life.
Adam takes the Staff from Shafat and beautiful royal-like garments appear on the body of Adam and Eve as clothing.
{SPACE}
A light ray comes out of Earth, connects all the planets, and stars together.
{GARDEN OF EDEN, JUPITER}
A naked Man and Woman sit out of heaps of sand in the centre of the garden at the same time.
{EXT. GRASSLAND, GABRIEL’S TERRITORY}
Gabriel is sitting on a glowing rocky chair.
Michael suddenly appears before Gabriel, waves his hand
and the Shade of light covers them.
Gabriel
(to Michael)
Is everything all right?
Michael
All is well. However, Satan has changed. In fact, I nearly believed that someone was impersonating him.
Gabriel
Sit.
A glowing rock appears behind Michael and he sits on it.
Michael
Thanks.
Gabriel
So, why is that?
Michael
I couldn’t read any fragment of an Archangel within him. It was like he’s been downgraded to a king demon; having some elements of king angel within.
Gabriel
Hmm… that’s really strange.
Michael
Yes. It is.
Gabriel
Since he’s now at Tehom, there’s nothing to worry about. His weakness will be doubled.
Michael
Most definitely. Maybe tripled.
Gabriel
The curse has sunk deeply into him.
Michael
(exhales)
Right.
{GARDEN OF EDEN, MERCURY, OLAM-CHUPHSHAH}
A naked Man and Woman sit out of heaps of sand in the centre of the garden at the same time.
//Note: all the “Garden of Eden(s)” have the same appearance as Earth’s, also, this same event of creation occur in almost all the planets in Olam-Chuphshah.//
Figure 3: Magnetic fields cover the planets and a light ray links the planets and stars together
{GARDEN OF EDEN, EARTH}
Shafat is glowing radiantly, floating slightly above Adam and Eve.
SHAFAT
Never ever, let this go to anyone.
ADAM
Is there someone else here?
SHAFAT
No, just you and your wife; Eve. The whole universe is sanitized of anything that could compromise your safety anyway. This is your world, no matter what you do, don’t forget to reach out to me.
(points up)
Look up.
(Adam and Eve look up)
I live up there. With this Seed, you can reach me easily even though it seems farther because I am your father and creator.
(points at the white magnificent building)
You see that house, that’s your house, this is your home. The creatures around you will serve you, name them whatever you like. You can command the waters and its creatures as long as this Seed is in your hands.
ADAM
That means I’ll have to take it wherever I go and never let it out of my hand?
SHAFAT
No, drop it now.
(Adam drops the staff)
Go into the water.
(Adam runs into the water)
Now command the Seed to come to you.
ADAM
(stretches his right hand and the Seed appears in his hand)
Wow!
SHAFAT
You can keep the Seed anywhere. Do not willingly give it out to anything that’s what I meant by losing it. Even if you leave the Seed in the bottom of the waters, nothing can claim it unless you willingly hand it over as a gift.
(to Eve)
Never let him lose that to anything. The universe depends on it.
EVE
(nods)
Yes, my Lord.
SHAFAT
No, you don’t understand, if you ever let him lose the Seed, any child born in your image will be dishonoured.
EVE
Born in my image?
SHAFAT
Women will serve men and will not be regarded among your sons. You will become a burden for him, a low class. Even if he may adore your beauty, you can never matter in important matters.
EVE
But why?
SHAFAT
Man bears the likeness of my son and in him is the highest authority in this universe. Understood?
EVE
(nods)
Yes, my Lord.
SHAFAT
(to Adam)
Come on!
(Adam runs to where Shafat and Eve are standing)
Look at that.
(points at dinosaurs)
Hahaha!
(Adam and Eve turn their faces to the dinosaurs)
You see that?
ADAM
Haha! They’re so big and beautiful.
EVE
Hahaha! I love them!
SHAFAT
They’re your friends, you can ride on them.
(faces Adam and Eve)
Now listen. The both of you shall come together and make love and out of that love shall another kind of you come.
(looks at Eve)
Through your womb shall babies be born and raised into this world.
ADAM
Thank you, my Lord, everything is so beautiful and lovely.
SHAFAT
Yes, and so shall it be forever. You shall live for a thousand years then you’ll be transformed to live up there with me forever. When that time comes, you will hand over the Seed to your Son and him to his Sons with the same instructions. The light of the star above your world will never ever hurt you as long as you are in possession of the Seed.
ADAM
Trust me, my Lord, I will never let go of this Seed to anything.
SHAFAT
(nods)
Hmm… look around.
(Adam and Eve look around)
There are many other gardens like this one on this planet for your children when you multiply and with this Seed, you can build other homes effortlessly. But, if you lose the Seed, this home will be destroyed together with others in this world and beyond. That means you’ll have to build a new home with your bare hands for years in order to live in it. This home is placed at the southernmost part of this world. Enjoy it forever!
{CAVE, SPACE - NIGHT}
Shade of light is covering Satan.
SATAN
Hahaha! They thought they’ve caught me. Hahaha!
FLASHBACK
{INT. SATAN’S PALACE, OUKHAH - NIGHT}
Satan and Azazel are under the Shade of light.
SATAN
I sensed the power of the Most High highly behind the Elders in their motion to take
back Olam-Chuphshah.
AZAZEL
What?
SATAN
Yes, but I want you to do something very important for me. Will you?
AZAZEL
I’ll do anything for you.
SATAN
It’s a sacrifice. You’ll take my appearance for a while. They may attack soon.
AZAZEL
What?
SATAN
Don’t be afraid, no one will find out because they can’t read you. I will use the power in the Crown.
AZAZEL
What if they hit me with the mightiest of powers, you know I can’t contain such hit.
SATAN
No, they won’t. They always send Michael against me, if you don’t panic, he won’t hurt you. He’s someone that always allow his opponent to strike him first. So, with Michael, you’re safe.
AZAZEL
What if other Archs attempt to strike me?
SATAN
I said they won’t! Trust me!
(looks down)
Even though I am no longer among them, they still respect me. They’re honourable beings who obey laws. So, there’s nothing to worry about. Okay?
AZAZEL
All right, sorry for doubting. You know I’m just scared.
SATAN
(looks at Azazel)
I know, it’s okay, but don’t be, you’re the right one for the job. The truth is, I don’t have the strength to attack anyone from Shamayim right now. If it happens that Michael meets with you, never ever look into his eyes and secondly, behave like me as much as possible. Make him think he is talking to his brother and never ever tremble at his fiery look. If he comes with those terrifying creatures of the Elders, never gaze your eyes upon them so that this power won’t wear off by the time fear crips in. Understood?
AZAZEL
Yes. What about others, can I look into their eyes?
SATAN
Even the Elders can’t figure out our little secret because of the Power in the Crown I wield.
(holds Azazel on his shoulder)
Whatever happens, do not look into anyone’s eyes, for if you do, our little secret will be exposed.
(walks away from Azazel slightly)
The Elders are coming to take over this universe in a weird way.
AZAZEL
Weird way?
SATAN
They’ve planned to detain all of us until we’ll have no choice than to repent and join other fools that left us. But, if I hide from their sight, I’ll be able to release you all from that prison and begin a new war.
AZAZEL
How did you know all of this?
SATAN
My visions brought us here and have proved the Elders wrong about how they think and reason. I hacked the vision through the power of the Crown.
AZAZEL
(nods)
Hmm…
SATAN
Do you doubt my visions?
AZAZEL
No…
(nods)
Never.
Satan
(nods)
Good.
END OF FLASHBACK
{EXT. CAVE, SPACE - NIGHT}
SATAN
Don’t worry, kids, I’m coming to rescue you and bring an end to their temporal conquest.
{GARDEN OF EDEN, EARTH - DAY}
Shafat is standing with Adam and Eve.
SHAFAT
You must do all I’ve told you and don’t forget, if you lose the Seed, you’ve lost everything. I know you don’t know what death means because, without the Seed, you and every other creature here will die, even this world will suffer quakes, and finally, the heat from the star may kill you. Don’t forget, lives in other planets depend on you having
the Seed in your custody.
ADAM
Thank you, my lord, we must keep to your command.
SHAFAT
Good.
(hands blink red)
It’s worship hour. You’ll enjoy this moment but take note, this will only happen after every six thousand years here.
Eve
Six thousand years?
Shafat
A thousand years on this planet is like a day to me, Eve.
(disappears)
LATER
The Most High’s light shines upon all planets.
{GARDEN OF EDEN, EARTH}
Water drops from the sky upon the face of Adam and Eve and they vibrate in great pleasure with moaning sounds. Their bodies become stronger.
//Same thing happens to all humans on other planets//
AHAVAH’S VOICE
(over their (all humans) minds)
My children, I bless you forever.
{CAVE, SPACE - DAY}
Shade of light is covering Satan. He is inside one of the rocks hovering in space. The light from a nearby star shines upon him.
SATAN
Heat.
(the crown on his head begins to glow gradually)
Hmm…
(smiles)
Good! The power in my crown that became weak is rising.
(waves his hand and the image of earth appears on an oval screen)
Earth…
(Adam and Eve appears on the screen)
They are in dominion over this universe and my revived creatures on Earth. So, those demons that left will be born through these people unto my earth. Fachiel and Evriel are now humans; Man and Woman, no more angels. More like a new world. I forgot to take them with me, though.
(sees the Seed of life in Adams' hand)
Look at that, in his hand is a great power called Seed of life. They are going to rule this universe with that Seed.
(the crown on his head glows)
No! I will never let that happen!
(stands)
They will live for a thousand years, then transform themselves into another form and go to Shamayim.
(sighs)
This is the most foolish plan of the Elders to take this place away from me. The presence of that Seed on earth cannot give me access to any planet in this universe.
(smiles)
I’m grateful for the revival of this crown, they thought they’ve destroyed me, but no, they’ve revived me. My demons are not going back to those stupid laws of Shamayim. If I take the Seed from Fachiel, that’s the end of humans in all these planets and I’ll be able to bring back my demons.
{EXT. GARDEN OF EDEN - NIGHT}
Adam and Eve are walking slowly towards their house. Moon is bigger in size than the Sun.
//This means that the moon is much closer to the Earth than the sun is.//
The moon is providing a lesser light for the garden compared to the light of the sun; during the day.
ADAM
(walking with the staff in his right hand)
I feel like kissing you right now.
EVE
What stops you then?
ADAM
The house.
EVE
The house?
ADAM
Let’s get into the house.
EVE
Hahaha.
{SHAHAR - DAY}
Repented demons are still taking the oath one after the other because they are too numerous to go in at once.
{INT. PARLOUR, ADAM AND EVE’S HOUSE - NIGHT}
Adam opens the door and steps into the room.
Eve enters the room.
The room has great technology; light turns on from Adam’s intuition.
EVE
I thought you’ll leave the room dark.
ADAM
(hugs and kisses Eve)
You don’t want me to see the face of my wife?
{INT. HALL, MELTSAR - DAY}
Rosh-Seraph is walking back and forth in the hall.
Shafat is standing behind his throne.
ROSH-SERAPH
The crown on Satan’s head is re-activating.
YAKACH
What do you mean it’s re-activating?
ROSH-SERAPH
The light and heat from stars of Olam-Chuphshah are awakening the crown.
SHAFAT
That doesn’t put humans into any danger.
ROSH-SERAPH
That doesn’t mean that Satan cannot get close to them. No other demon can approach humans but Satan can approach and interact with them.
GADOL
That’s not a joke, Rosh.
(Rosh-Seraph nods)
All the Elders laugh.
ROSH-SERAPH
What is now funny?
SHAFAT
Hahaha! The Seed can’t stop Satan from going close to humans, but if Adam never let go of the Seed by his will, Satan is a waste.
Hahaha!
ROSH-SERAPH
What? That’s not what we should be worried about, this is why we should worry about that.
(all the Elders stop laughing and keep mean faces)
If he doesn’t get Adam, he can get his sons.
YAKACH
Rosh, I wanted to tell you that the one you are referring to is captured in Tehom under our custody.
ROSH-SERAPH
Satan is captured? Then why am I getting negative signals from the crown on his head?
All the Elders laugh loudly.
Yakach
We have everything under control, Rosh.
Rosh-Seraph
Well, it doesn’t appear so to me.
All the Elders stop laughing.
{EXT. CAVE, SPACE - DAY}
Satan sits with his two legs folded as if he is meditating.
SATAN
I’m going to fight the host of Shamayim again with my army. They thought the
creation of humans will be able to stop me? No! This is my chance to finally overcome them. I will match against them in battle again with my army.
(sighs)
But before this can work, they must all accept to bear my mark on any part of their body.
Satan opens his palm and the mark ‘666’ is on his palm.
{TEHOM}
Satan and all demons are falling endlessly.
Uriel appears before Satan.
URIEL
Tell me why you don’t look like Satan.
SATAN
(shivers)
I am Satan; your former brother.
URIEL
You mean Lucifer?
SATAN
(quickly)
Yes! I was Lucifer but now Satan. Stop calling me Lucifer anyway.
URIEL
(goes closer to Satan)
Let me see your head.
SATAN
Get away from me, you moron.
URIEL
(strikes Satan’s head with a lightning bolt)
Show yourself!
SATAN
Arrrh!
Satan groans and turns into Azazel.
URIEL
I got you, fool. You aren’t Satan and my visions weren’t deceiving me.
AZAZEL
Please don’t hurt me! I was only following orders!
KOKABIEL
(stunned as he falls in distance)
What? He isn’t even here with us?
MALPHAS
(through the mind to Kokabiel)
Shut up.
Uriel disappears.
{INT. HALL, MELTSAR - DAY}
Uriel is standing before the Elders. Shade of light is covering the hall.
URIEL
That’s what I discovered.
SHAFAT
Thanks to you, Uriel. You can now go.
Shade of light goes off and Uriel disappears.
Yakach
Interesting…
SHAFAT
(waves his hand and Shade of light covers the hall)
Wow…
ROSH-SERAPH
I said it, I was right. Satan is free out there in Olam-Chuphshah with humans. The worst part is that the crown on his head has returned to its powerful state. We can’t easily arrest him now, even if we do, with the help of all the demons in Tehom, he may compromise the prison. So, we need to act now.
YAKACH
Hmm… this is terrible news.
ROSH-SERAPH
We need to protect the Seed as soon as possible.
SHAFAT
I trust Adam, he won’t give out the Seed.
ROSH-SERAPH
What about his sons?
SHAFAT
You are suggesting that we hold Olam-Zaku’s passage to Eve’s womb for the meantime?
ROSH-SERAPH
Holding the birth track will give Adam and Eve much time to figure out who Satan really is before bringing in sons, because I think he’s already with them. Funny enough, we can’t control that.
GEBURAH
What if he doesn’t figure that out soon? We can’t hold that track forever.
ROSH-SERAPH
We can hold it for as long as the Seed is still with Adam and Eve. Besides, I don’t trust Adam that much.
YAKACH
Why?
ROSH-SERAPH
First, he has to prove his worthiness to us in some years, that’s why we need to close the birth track. Secondly, he’s a freewill creature, hope you know what that means.
SHAFAT
We’re closing that track right away. Then, we’ll give Satan tough moments to distract him.
ROSH-SERAPH
If we get anywhere close to Satan right now, it would appear before Adam as if we are oppressing Satan and not truthful, because we told him there’s no one else there with him. You know, with his freewill he can do anything with or without the Seed.
YAKACH
You’re right.
Shafat
That puts us in a difficult situation.
Yakach
Let’s guard Adam with all the possible advice we can give and plan on how to imprison Satan.
ROSH-SERAPH
Very nice! Taking Satan away from Adam is the best option. But it won’t be that easy right now. We need to protect the Seed by stopping birth on Earth alone. Other humans on other planets can keep multiplying but for earth, it’s a risk.
{EXT. UNDERWATER, GARDEN OF EDEN, EARTH - DAY}
Adam is playing with fishes.
ADAM
(sees a Shark)
Shark! Come on, carry me on your back.
SHARK
Jump on me now, Adam…
//At this time, animals could speak in the language that humans understand.//
{FLOWERING YARD}
A serpent, lion and three tigers are playing with Eve.
//Note: This serpent is exactly the same as the serpent present today on earth (without arms or legs)//
The serpent tickles the toe of Eve with its tongue.
EVE
(giggles)
Hey, Serpent, don’t do that.
SERPENT
You don’t like it?
EVE
I do, but not when you do it like that. Hahaha!
Michael and Gabriel are walking under the Shade of light; unseen by Eve or any animals.
MICHAEL
These guys are much different from other humans living on other planets. I thought they’re supposed to forget everything they had in their past life.
GABRIEL
Yeah, they did forget everything.
MICHAEL
Then why do they name the animals with the exact name they had in the past world?
GABRIEL
That’s a mystery, besides, this two were angels.
MICHAEL
That means they didn’t lose everything.
GABRIEL
Maybe.
MICHAEL
The animals can even speak like ours.
GABRIEL
They really have good company here.
Michael
This is a copy of our territories in Shamayim. What are the Elders doing…?
A suspenseful look appears on the faces of Gabriel and Michael.
End of Second Chance



