Endless Journey Beyond HTML version

And I wrote the following as a critique to the above Poem by an anonymous poet!!!
I hear your voice inside my head
Like thousand words singing choirs instead
I feel your love enchanting my soul
You're the one who makes me whole.
It is not the verbosity of your words
it is how you shape up your swords
Swords of worded simplicity
the words have ineffective verbosity.
I love you from your head to toe
Like an amateur writer's words love to show
As amicable as I might sound
My words are tough and bite like hound.
Yet you loved me the way I am
so the clouds are going to dance to our love song
your strings of love hold my soul
I love you and you make me whole.