An interesting concept but poorly written and not well executed. It seemed as though it was written by a 12 year old. Perhaps it is the translation but it really seemed as though I wasted my download and the 5 minutes to read it.
D.s.walker LIKES this book
Excellent short story, nice perspective. Tonnes of scope for expansion.
Chris DISLIKES this book
kind of a boring story, i don't really like it... Zzzz...
Tom Sobieski DISLIKES this book
Just didn't like it.
Tom LIKES this book
Very short but wonderful reading. The wording is somewhat off but it may have been translated from language other than english.