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Hoofs of Light

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Author: Chrys Romeo

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"Hoofs of Light" is a fantastic excursion into the mystery of life, an attempt to see through a labyrinth of unexplained events, finding a way out of the tapestry of time and actions, where love and the inevitable need for freedom are inseparable and eternal. Infinity unfolds and time spins, becoming round, as you get the chance to look into centuries and discover invisible connections between the real and the surreal, like finding a clue that solves a riddle. "Hoofs of Light" reveals eternal values of life that can make the spirit free, each day becoming brighter and better, as the universe is spinning at the speed of light.

Christine

Read this book twice. The first time I was stuggling to understand some of it but the 2nd time around I understood . Absolutely loved it. will read it again


chrys romeo

Thank you Kelle for your "rich" above comment. It shows you have a vast experience with reading technical instructions and menus instead of literature that you actually must make sense of. I appreciate it that you read it despite the terrible effort you must have felt. It is to your credit. And you put so much effort into deconstructing it, wasting your time with comments. Your comment proves the only fact that what you read makes no sense to you. Remember that how you see it shows your own perception - or lack of. It doesn't mean that to other people it has no meaning whatsoever. There might be other readers who actually have a more than "obtuse" sense in finding the links between the flashes of time, or caring about what happens, or finding an answer at the end. It must have been tremendously difficult to you to see it. It is not a reality tv show. It is a subtle story about time travel. Your questions resemble a gymnasium pupil's confusion. And I must point out that Hoofs is an alternative plural to Hooves. sincerely, Chrys Romeo


Kelle

You've got to be kidding me. To say this story was "disjointed" would be generous. There's no character development; nothing in the story or the unnamed narrator makes the reader care about him, nor this "woman" character who keeps appearing. Nothing to make the reader care about what's happening or why these "times" or "realities" are jumping around like this. Is there a purpose to the hypnosis part? What about the armies? Is there a parallel that the reader should be seeing between the child "soldiers" and the adult ones? The ending should give the reader some answers, yet there aren't any. Grammatical and punctuation errors are rife in this manuscript, as well. The plural of "hoof" is "hooves". The metaphors are obtuse at best but most often just don't make sense. It reads like a melatonin-induced dream that someone scribbled frantically upon waking, certain that it means something, when all along it was just the subconscious firing extra synapses.


ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Chrys Romeo

Thank you to Free-Ebooks for publishing my stories online and thank you to the readers. Best wishes!

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