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DreamLust

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Published: 3 years ago

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Follow the erotic dreams of Benito and Amelia. Will they finally meet. Amelia has something to hide.

Melissa Parent Gowett

A great read but the grammatical errors in this piece were many, Get Word or a dictionary please. But keep writing! I look forward to more Claire Potter!


vin dictivo

Yes. I agree with most of what has been said about this piece. Definitely a little brush up on grammar would be a very good idea. I only need to read a few lines in the beginning to confirm that. I don't mean to sound judgmental but i know this much that if you want to be a good writer, you need to convey your thoughts and ideas as clear as possible to your readers and not leave them wondering, even confused, as to what you're trying to say.


bunty

great erotic idea, very well written and a good suspense between dream and reality


Geoff Clynes

Drove myself to almost halfway, but the poor English is such a drag. Even a spellcheck would pick up half of the irritants, but Claire needs a proofreader/editor to help her make a stipend. Material is not very erotic either.


Loredana Sava

It is full of spelling and grammar mistakes. I wonder if the author has any academic education at all...


Brian Spencer

needs some work on the type errors but a nice read.. Can't wait to read book 2


Roger Corben

Loved it but it does need proofing, it is frustrating as a reader to want to correct its spelling and sometimes usage of language. still 3 out of 6 stars.


Pete

Desperately needs proof reading by someone with better grammar skills.


Jerry Park Park

I read four pages and had to stop. There were so many typos, grammatical errors, inconsistent tenses, etc. that I couldn't stand to read any more. I know these are free e-books but really - get someone to proof-read your manuscript before you publish it.


Lennart Strale

Bad language. The text is unreadable.


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Claire Potter

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