The dimensions are in chaos, magic is illegal, and water is a rare commodity. Kyrin is running from the law. As a magic user, she’s marked for death, and as a run-away from the Shadowmere, she’s hunted as a weapon. Shifting between dimensions is all that’s kept her alive. On the brink of being caught by the Shadowmere, Kyrin stumbles into a dimension devoid of the drought and seemingly untouched by the wrath of the Consortiums. In this dimension, she finds a people innocent of the evils of the universe and naïve to the worlds surrounding them. Lord Alric has ruled over his kingdom for 15 years under the direction of their god, Sithias. Before his time, the gods fought, and evil was removed from the lands. It isn’t until Kyrin arrives that he’s even considered that evil may still be among them, or that the long-dead use of magic may still exist.
The dimensions are in chaos, magic is illegal, and water is a rare commodity. Kyrin is running from the law. As a magic user, she’s marked for death, and as a run-away from the Shadowmere, she’s hunted as a weapon. Shifting between dimensions is all that’s kept her alive. On the brink of being caught by the Shadowmere, Kyrin stumbles into a dimension devoid of the drought and seemingly untouched by the wrath of the Consortiums. In this dimension, she finds a people innocent of the evils of the universe and naïve to the worlds surrounding them. Lord Alric has ruled over his kingdom for 15 years under the direction of their god, Sithias. Before his time, the gods fought, and evil was removed from the lands. It isn’t until Kyrin arrives that he’s even considered that evil may still be among them, or that the long-dead use of magic may still exist.
I found it very difficult to put down. I have read the full series, the other two books purchased for a small fee from SmashWords. It has been a long time since I became so engrossed and lost in a story. Fantastic. I look forward to reading other stories by this author.
The characters are developed fairly well and the plot is strong. The book needs to be edited properly. Though I enjoyed the book, mistakes in grammar and punctuation are distracting as are the sections that should be cut to be concise.
Amazing book, Amazing read where do I find Paragoy Dimention????????????? Iv looked everywere on the net but can not find a Free version of Paragoy Dimention, I NEED to read the next book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I liked the book, however, I thought it could have been better.
The plot is very good, but not detailed, which is something that needs to be done. The character are a little bit too perfect for my liking and there have been some silly parts that the book could have done without.
I thought the story line was very good and the descriptions were just right.Some authors just go into much detail and lose track of the storyline. I will try reading some of your other books and if I can find a 2 extra$$ I will send it your way. I have written a short novel and people have seemed to like it. I did write a sequel but went on to other things after a short 15 pages. I imagine you will keep it up if you are a writer and I wish you luck. This is the 1st feedback that I have given so I don't know if that means anything.
The book is just awesome !! I couldn't stop reading when i started. Well i'v also read part of book 2, 'paragoy dimension' on SMASHWORDS, isn't just the bomb too! ! I wish the two books were here on so i'd download em. . . The story is great, so is everything about it.
the book is great, but i think it should have continued a bit, I didn't like the ending, 'cause it doesn't say what happened to the shadowmere or aha happened to kyrin and Alric. so I suggest a coninuation.
For not being an author, this book was put together very well, and she knows how to keep her readers engrossed. T.M. Nielsen is too modest and like everyone else, I can't wait for the next book in the series!
The book is intriguing and kept me glued till the last page. I found it amazing that fear and a deep sense of loyalty could keep the heroine to a god who thought nothing about her. It is a good work and like to read some other books written by the author.
My goodness, the book is really phenomenal. Can hardly wait to get to the juicy details of the other books. Good Job by the author. Just imagine if she had decided not to post this book,; it would have have deprived reader from experiencing the joy of the dimensions as she tells it as well as the amazing story.Really, thanks a lot.
Great story! I love the writing style. Didn't want to put it down. Author needs a different editor as I found typos and some poor grammer. Can't wait to read the next in the series. Too bad I can't find it here. G
I thank the author this story. It is VERY, VERY, VERY GOOD! It kept me up all night reading--I couldn't book it down. I have enjoyed all of this author's stories. If you haven't read any others, please try them. Keep them coming Mr. Neilsen!
Wow. Loved this book! Not only is the story incredibly original, its characters are fully developed and true to themselves. Definitely a recommended read!
your book it beautiful, the story really flows along. it took me 3hrs 2 read but i luved every min of it. cant wait to read the next one...in the morning lol. i love the concepts of the worlds n would luv to read move adventures in these worlds.
As surprised as I am that anyone at all claimed to like this book, I am more surprised that only two others took the time to express their displeasure in it. I finished it all, but only with the sort of tranfixed state in which one usually finds onesself when confronted with a natural catastrophe. It offended all of my sensibilities as an intellectual being, but the wreckage was too horrendous to be fully believed unless witnessed through to the end.
None of the characters were believable. Their lack of credibility was not aided by their shallow, two-dimensional makeup. The plot devices were predictable, except where they were too outrageous to be plausible. The story itself was boring, only somewhat livened by sudden inexplicable encounters and "battles" that didn't even progress the plot at all.
Skipping the rest of the issues with the plot (numerous holes, a plethora of unresolved issues, and "twists" that just didn't make sense), the book was full of grammatical errors, spelling errors, and used the same set of words again. And again. And again. I'm convinced the author has never heard of either a dictionary or a thesaurus.
I am horrified at the thought that this may actually have been published.
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