Circle Of Greed
by Ron DieselCircle of greed is a story set in Australia of the perfect casino robbery executed by three professional thieves that quickly turns into a major disaster because of the greed of the participants, the story moves through various plots and counter plots. The idea for this story came to me while playing roulette in a casino, every now and again a casino employee came to the table with two guards...
D G Sutherland 
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Quite a good story, but, oh dear, the number of plural words given apostrophes! If you are going to say something like "The gardens were full of flowers", why is "garden's" given an apostrophe, whereas "flowers" is not?!! Surely "garden's" means belonging to a garden, such as in "the garden's appearance"? As I say, a fair story spoiled for me by really poor punctuation. Perhaps a revision course in English grammar is called for. LIKES this bookMozzy LIKES this book
I agree with Mr Kenyon's criticism regarding punctuation and sentence structure. I also agreee it's a good read. As a budding author myself I can appreciate the seemingly endless revision that can be so exasperating to any author. I look forward to Ron's next publication. LIKES this bookMorris Kenyon LIKES this book
Firstly, I realy enjoyed this book. It has many things going for it. It is fast paced, with an interesting and believable flawed hero in Murray. The plot rattles along and keeps you involved. The Australian locale is well drawn. I've read thrillers by published authors which weren't as good as this. LIKES this bookHowever, and I hope Mr. Diesel takes this as constructive criticism, the sentence structure could be better. Shorter sentences rather than long ones with lots of ,s would've made the story flow better and make it easier to read. If he revises this book it would be truly first rate.
That said, I'd like to read more by this author.
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