Chronicles of Caledon; Sword of Souls [excerpt]
by Douglas S. TaylorThe Sword of Souls is the first book of the mystifying Chronicles of Caledon. The book introduces the reader to the Caledon world (Caledon Prime) and a brief history of the planet,and how it came to be up to present time is briefly written in the introduction. However, you must read into the book where there are dark passages that clues the reader into more of the rich history adding to...
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This excerpt had me totally engrossed and I'm now trying to track down the ebook... LIKES this bookJason Dornbach LIKES this book
Not grammatically correct but still worth it. LIKES this bookMonico 
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I couldn't get past the second page. The very poor grammar and syntax makes it hard to understand, impossible to take seriously, and absolutely uninteresting to read. So why even bother trying more ? DISLIKES this bookIt is an insult to literatur to pretend writing a book when one doesn't know how to write accurately (and here, we're not even close).
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Like the work, where can i get the next books in the series? LIKES this bookStephanie DISLIKES this book
I stopped reading this book around page 50. The consistently poor grammar made this book very difficult to read, but the extensive use of foul language spanning several pages in the middle of the book was absurd. The story was somewhat interesting but slow. I was quite disappointed in this book. DISLIKES this bookThomas Paterson LIKES this book
Very different from what I have read in the past. Excellent, left me wanting more. LIKES this bookTerry LIKES this book
i am still reading it, but it's the sort of story i like. LIKES this bookJason DISLIKES this book
this could have been a excellent book, but for the many grammar errors i wont be reading anything from this author again DISLIKES this bookLolo DISLIKES this book
Someone needs to rewrite this, the English is horrible. And how come it is only 3 chapters instead of the whole book? DISLIKES this bookKen DISLIKES this book
Poorly written, and action happens all of a sudden with no build-up. It was almost painful to read. The story has potential, but the author needs to either get a better handle on the English language, or let someone else write for him/her/it. DISLIKES this bookLasse Nokelainen DISLIKES this book
I wonder where do the stars come.. DISLIKES this bookValerie Hau DISLIKES this book
What a Lie - this is NOT a free Book only the first 3 chapters - should not be listed as a "FREE" book!! DISLIKES this bookAnne Leti LIKES this book
Only the first three chapters? Not happy. LIKES this bookSecondly as stated by maximilianmayfield@hotmail.com the punctuation and the rushing made it hard to continue reading what little was there. More time needed to be spent understanding the characters and their motivation it just went to fast for my liking making it difficult to make sense or gain a sense of time and space. I think the idea has great potential though, it however needs a lot of work.
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I liked it. It started out good and kept getting better! LIKES this bookThe only problem I'm having now is trying to download the whole book, is there more?
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Holy crap. Do not waste your time with this horrid, horrid piece of "literature". Within the first paragraph it will be instantly apparent that the author has no understanding of narrative, or sentence structure. Run-ons and sporadic punctuation abound, with only marginal coherency to the whole thing. DISLIKES this bookYou can tell that this is fiction from someone familiar with all the trappings of fantasy novels, but none of the substance. He deals in all the appropriate cliches, but its just not readable on any level.
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Disappointing as it is only the firs three chapters just enough to get one hooked. Great what i read. LIKES this bookWhat did you think of this book?
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