As a proof reader/English language lecturer, I was very disappointed that the punctuation was extremely poor, no apostrophies, gaps where there should not (bet ween, slap stick), her for here, bear for bare, mam for ma'am etc.,etc. If Nicole Duffeck reads this, please contact me - actionconnect@yahoo.co.uk - for proof reading your next book. I enjoyed the content and hope that you write many more books.

Great book, only disappointing thing was that it was too short. Love it.

Great book! would enjoy reading others by this author.

very well narrated... surely yes can read other books of the same author

I thought the story was good, would definately read another book by this author.

A good easy read with a good story within the story.

lovely characters in a well written book.

I love the bookk, but it's just really short. What happens with Nicole and Gavin after he comes back. Do they go back to London or do they stay in wisconsin, but I loved it.

This book was well written, and a fun read. The characters are lovable and all it needs is some minor editing to be perfect.

It's a really nice book i don't like reading romantic novel much but this one is an exception it was well written i love it

very good book would read another of this authors books.

A very good story. I wish the English grammar had been a bit better.

very interesting from the start to the end

Just nice and a great moral support book for the ones who experienced it their selves out there.

I always want to give everyone who has the gumption to actually put a book 'out there' for others to read a huge pat on the back. This could have been quite a good short novel but oh! the mistakes and confusion are just too many to forgive. This is not up to par at all and the author would do well to ask forgiveness, pull it out, do the work and then put it back in again....

Good story, but difficult to read; too many typo's and grammatical errors. The main male character's name changed back and forth between Gavin and Alan???? The story ended very abruptly. It would have been nice for Nicole to experience a little joy in her life, after what she had been through, before the book ended.

The author has talent, but really needs an editor.

other than the grammar errors and such, this was a great book. Wish it would have been longer!

Its awesome read! Hey Nicole, please complete the story...it ended so soon!!

enjoyed this short read very much.. nicely written and human emotions described well.. although i think the plot became very much predictable after the initial twist and turns... kudos to the author anyways :)

Quite a good read

such an interesting, breath taking novel

Enjoyable short story but the grammar and spelling is awful. All the same was a good read just needs a little tweaking.

Nice story and good writing but the mistakes are absolutely horrible, there are also sentences in which words are missing. I'm not a native speaker so I sometimes had to read sentences more than once to get the point. I wonder if there's a way to contact the author?? Proofread it would definitely be a great book without reservations.

awesome writing with a consistent flow of words.......... enjoyed reading it .......

Was a good story but had to spell check it before I could read it. No apostrophes used and was giving me a headache.

I really enjoyed reading this book. In my opinion, if you are a good reader, the grammatical errors and apostrophes won't keep you from getting the point.

As I said, I liked this book but I agree that there were too many mistakes that took away from the pleasure I received from reading this book. I am always proof reading too.

this was a realy good read

this book was really good..

some errors with names and grammar.

The editing and lack of apostrophes makes it a bit of a challenge to read but other than that a really good book. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

OMG. the spelling and grammatical errors are horrendous! Who writes a book without proofing it? That was so unfair to readers, not to mention inconsiderate. Don't waste your time on this if you're literate.

Great read, couldn't put it down,would have been even better if it were longer.

At first glance I didn't feel the story was long enough to involve the details needed to leave me feeling complete ... I was SOoo wrong. I don't think you needed another word.

A beautiful love story which leaves a smoothing feel to the heart...a must read for the romantic

Leaves you wanting more.... it was a great book!

I agree with most everyone else in reference to the shortness, grammar,and unfinished ending. If the writer had written another 75 to 100 pages it would have been even better.

I'm not huge reader, but I read this in less than 24hours. Laughed and cried, great read xx

I gave up on this book. To begin with there is little structure, names change, errors are too much to bother myself trawling through. This is the first download from this site for me and I very much hope that this is not the standard of every book. Not impressed so far.

Beginning at the End is the type of book which doesn’t let you avert your eyes even for a few minutes lest you miss the story. The book is captivating with characters who face similar sorrowful fates but the positive note and the most striking feature about the book is that it has friends, relatives and colleagues who are caring and understanding and trying to better the situation. The novel proves that when aspects of mutual love and respect are questioned problems crop up between couples. No one can control everything all the time, but for the multi-talented Nicole, fate favors in the form of good advice from her kind-hearted people and she deftly maneuvers the situation to her side.

Good story. Pity about the spelling mistakes.

Liked it. Easy read. Good characters

I would have found it more enjoyable if there were not so many mistakes. Better proof reading in future please.

Too short. . .But sweet

A very nice read

Interesting and captivating story but comes to a quick end

Very intriguing, interesting novel

Good story, but the ending didnt seem complete.

I actually like it...it was realistic for a fiction

This book needs some better proofreading and is a bit rough but has very good characters, plot, and pace and is enjoyable to read.

I liked this book, but I didnt like the way it ended. To me it was unfinished. Would have like to know what happend with Nicole & Gavin

I love the story. But the only thing I didn't like about it is that the grammar is kind of off. Great story though, wish it was a bit longer.

a good read finished it in 2 days couldn't put it down

Poorly written (more like a child), incorrect info on some of the bits in England. Needs to do more research and use SPELL CHECK and GRAMMAR CHECK!!!

Liked the book...as one likes the hint of music in an elevator, not necessary to hear but pleasant none the less. I agree with previous commentators. There was a great deal of errors made through out I was able to ignore them for the most part but what really made me sad was how short the story was. We read for days about sights and smells but never got any good back story on our main character(not sure if I should call her Ella or Nicole)and even got thrown for some loops when we learned of the age differences and about her late fathers infidelity which I figure would have been her mother not her father since he was so busy making money for the family and what not. Ryan didn't get much face time either, nothing with his father interacting with Gavin/Allan(again not sure which to call him) which would have put us(the reader) into the loop because then we would have been rooting for Gavin/Allan to sweep Nic/Ella off her feet as it is right now we didn't root for him because he was so stoic. Out and out its the kind of rushed together story I would expect from a seventeen year old not a grown adult. Not bad yet not good either. I apologize for my grammatical errors and spelling mistakes but I must admit I'm not an author.

You're kidding, right? 78 pages??

romance for intelligent women....liked it, but the word is 'matter', not 'mater' (lots of grammatical mistakes....sorry-i feel like a proofreader sometimes)

I have not read this book yet just got it now yet already I'm inspired. Through bad spelling and mix match thinking these one thing that stands out above the rest. This is a story about how when you really down in the dark pits and think where to from here, you just need to wait the rainbow and clear skies are around the corner. I'm glad I found this unproofread version cause waiting for the real thing would not of come today the day I feel like all the bad is happening at once. Thank you e-books and writer!

Too many spelling/grammatical errors to excuse. Weak plot. Too much focus on American popular culture.

This <book> if full of typos, errors, missing words and the two main characters change name: Gavin - becomes Allan - becomes Gavin again.
In the preview she is referred to as Ella and her name in the book is Nicole.
At one point they say: <...she is twice his age...> which in fact it is later confirmed that ...he is older then she is....
I find it annoying to have to read a sentence twice because it makes no sence (ex: the there of them left the pub......instead of three) and so on.
This was my first book from your site and I hope the others have been more carefully reviewed and proofread.