It's been days since the plague hit America. Most of the population has turned into mindless creatures that hunger for human flesh and blood. Danny Hefner and a handful of others might live through this hellish nightmare but to be truthful they would be better off dead. Danny watched and read plenty of Zombie fiction in his lifetime but nothing could have prepared him for this unthinkable, unimaginable hell.
It's been days since the plague hit America. Most of the population has turned into mindless creatures that hunger for human flesh and blood. Danny Hefner and a handful of others might live through this hellish nightmare but to be truthful they would be better off dead. Danny watched and read plenty of Zombie fiction in his lifetime but nothing could have prepared him for this unthinkable, unimaginable hell.
I read this story for 5 hours straight; I don't know what intrigued me so much. It wasn't one of the best books I've ever read, but it sure was interesting. I was hoping for possiblely more character development, but besides that it was a very entertaining book!
I had to stop at day 6. Danny is the worst post-apocalyptic group leader ever. If someone like him was in charge, everyone would be dead. A couple days into finding a safe place, he starts leading expeditions to find survivors with no objection from the group since apperantly everyone is perfectly okay with facing animated corpses and risking their lives for strangers. And he finds 80 people and brings them to their hideout! Are you kidding me?! That's a small community with kids and old people and everything! You've just reduced your supplies by 80%. And he doesn't stop there. He fills all those people and kids into buses for a search mission for a better location! How about a small group of adults? Logic? Common sense? And no one ever reacts to the direness of the situation, everyone just accepts zombies at face value. It takes Danny 10 seconds to make the decision of killing his wife and that's the first zombie he ever sees. The characters are only introduced by name and some of them, like the youth pastor, doesn't even get that chance. Oh and the writing... You just get verbs in past tense and that's it. This was a bad, bad piece of writing.
I think that this writer should put out another book or two so I can give a truer comment. I am a Dean Koontz fan so I know my writers. PW seems to be budding on something special, maybe if he was to sharpen the plot a little more, maybe take some advice from a well known published writer, that being said, I think Mr. PW has great potential.
Don't look for any interesting characters or even well defined ones or for anything you can relate to in this book. The plot is childishly simple and leads to a bad ending. It's one of those books that you read the whole time thinking "it's gotta get good soon" and it never does. This is by-far the worst book I've read in years. I'm just thankful that I read it for free and didn't waste money as well as my time on it.
I wish the book was longer. It was good but the ending was too quickly, you didn't explain it like you did with the rest of the story. Honestly i give it 2 1/2 Stars
Sorry, but the writing is off, using to much past tense and you have to learn to get away from all the "he did this, he did that" you need to practice your prose some more.
I just finished the e-book and I loved it. Specially because I love horror stories. The story was good but they were some unnecessary detail. The part of the story in the both Buy-Right super center was kinda getting boring because, specially Danny going to "smocking section" again and again and lighting up cigarettes. I wish there were more horrible moment in the story and some romantic moment between Danny and Samantha. The ending was indeed surprising and heart-breaking to me. I thought at the end they would find help as they went out to find and help other survivor but I didn't expect that was coming.
But over all I loved it.
If you're a fan of the Walking Dead and zombie genre, this book will bore you. It is great for tweens and squeamish readers, but for die-hard fans, you keep waiting for the apocalypse other shoe to drop, but you're just left hanging. Story is almost there, but still too perfect, too nice, too feel-good to be realistic for the topic. You almost think "OK, now it's going ... going ... pfsssst." nothing. Fizzles out at the end. Nice, but not a true zombie apocalypse novel. Think of a heavy metal KISS fan meeting Celine Dion. Yes, it's that boring. It has promise, but the e-book never takes off. If it is a pre-cursor to a series, the series has to get a lot grittier and messy and horror filled. Walking Dead writers/fans would laugh it out of town.
The writing is a bit amateurish and goes into a lot of unnecessary detail. Two perfect people, the shirt he wears the colour of his eyes Pleeease, give me strength. I have only read the first two pages and I was irritated with the writing.
Sorry about this as I would not download this at all.
By Wayne F. Perkins. The Hypnosis Educator, Trainer, and Author focuses on methods toward implementing hypnosis on human beings and other living organisms.
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